Here is a readable link the the rubrics for AP Lang this year. Make sure you are looking at the one for essay two which is the analysis essay.
For tomorrow, please bring ONE Edwards quotation from your essay that you wrote a revised "middle step" how analysis for. If you are able to print in color, it might be helpful for you to color code the steps in the analysis process in the following manner:
Black font: your quotation and device (Where/What)
Blue font: your "how" analysis. (How). How is this scary? What about the quotation encourages salvation?
Red font: your connection to one or more of your purpose ideas. (Why) Why does Edwards want to do the things he just did? Why is this important for his purpose?