For Thursday, you are performing style revisions on the immigration writing sample that you wrote for Mr. Nickel today in history. The rubric below shows what you will be evaluated on in regards to style. Please do not focus your revisions on content, but instead work on sentence beginnings, reducing passive, progressive, and linking, transitional strategies, etc.
You will be turning in your raw copy with revisions marked, and then a final copy that you typed with the revisions made.
Style Rubric
(My apologies that the style rubric still contains spelling/usage errors, but time did not permit me to make the changes and still get this information posted.